Critque Comments

Items/comments from Intensive review 5.31.08:

1. Further document the area under investigation and define the areas that do not work and show how the masterplan addresses the problems/issues.

2. Analyze the proposed masterplan so that the interventions address the issues clearly - make the parti clear.

3. Can the river address the buildings rather then having buildings address the river? By implementing the pedestrian bridge, the Scioto Pennisula needs to be addressed as an area of redevelopment.

4. Masterplan vs. Building? What direction do I move forward with? Can simply focusing on one building serve as the catalyst for the masterplan?